When Silence Screams..
Surya | Mar 20, 2011 | 2 comments
This dark veil of silence..
Is it inside me or around me?
Or is it everywhere I be..
It engulfs the pleasure,the pain,
And leaves me alone in an acid rain..
Empty..Blank..Insane..
When it screams, the whole world goes quiet.
And then only I exist, amidst the ongoing riot.
Left alone, I stay hidden under the veil,
For its better to be empty when the silence screams…
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Good poem…
Surya, good poem… I cannot judge a poem…. but i can’t see any extraordinary work here.. anyway it is nice to see someone writing poems….
keep on going… there is a better future for you in poetry……
think a lot…..
I like the concept of comparing silence with a dark veil…
because, since man is a social being it is really ( not getting words) bad to keep silence. with some one around us……
I was an introvert some years before….. i used to talk with only one person regularly…… my personal diary….
But when i came to the college, i got many friends sweet friends , that i slowly lifted the veil of silence… i cracked the shell of being an introvert and come out of it… even now i am not completely an extrovert like many of my friends and many others in the college, i have changed a lot…. i started speaking to girls( i am not a flirt).
( i used to look down when i see any girl during my plus two,,,,,, believe this)……
now i am happy with change.
So what i am saying is, silence to some one we should not have been silent is a real dark veil…….
So i like that comparison a lot…
well done……